I can tell you right now I’m not happy with the ending. I think it would be cool to have a big stand-off happen in cyberspace, parallel to the one taking place in the real world.
I want more sci-fi elements, including a unique system of slang, so I need to go back in and change around a bunch of the dialogue.
I want the political elements to be more explicit, so I will have to change some of the delivery, and include more research so that I can really get my point across.
I need to make sure there is more consistency in the way things are explained and described.
I need to make sure there is more consistency in the way characters interact with one another, and with the world.
I want each character to have a distinct way of speaking.
I want Pigeon to have more agency in her journey.
I want to expand on the idea of a Runner Culture.
I want a more coherent understanding of the way organised crime controls the city, and more explicit discussions of the way the System operates.